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Re: The Forgotten Girl
Thank you for you review , you brought up some very interesting points. I'm glad to hear my writing style has somewhat improved and I will work on trying to ...
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: The Forgotten Girl
Thank you so much for your review, it was insightful and very helpful. I will work on improving my writing..
Dec 20, 2012 -
Re: The Beginnings of Nowhere
Thank you so much for the advice , I will continue to work on it. :)
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: An endless dream
Hello and yes it is a pretty old story. I just recently returned ,so I suppose if you want me to I'll continue .I wrote this a while back and ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: I'm Sure.
It was really easy to read (now don't take that the wrong way). What I mean is, that your sentence structure and your choice of words, successfully gently guided the ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: in church, in us
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this; it is interesting to see what other people's views are on religion and church. Although I am not very ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: Fireworks
Hello, I really liked this piece. I like how you slowly bring in the element of fantasy into the piece. It's a shame it was so short, you should think ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: I walk down a street
Very interesting, I wonder if the 'stranger' is a 'stranger' at all, judging by the narrator’s reaction towards them. Your choice of words is really good. It effectively takes the ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: Bells
Thank you so much for the review and as you said you%u2019re free to interpret the piece any way you want. So you can decide what happened (I know that ...
Oct 18, 2012 -
Re: The Tree
I loved this poem, your really did a good job with it! The concept behind it was quite brilliant and the point of the poem is put across nicely. Well ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Sky
yes there is more to it i will check my grammar and such ( i always seem to have problems when it comes to that.) thank you for your feedback ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Eliza and Morgan
i really liked this although i think you should of put a bit more feeling into it. it was a bit short and i would have liked you to explain ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Not quite alone
thanks dude sure i'll tell u when i write more
May 26, 2010 -
Re: A game of Cat and Mouse (Prologue)
Way ta go Dude. this is realy good. i don't realy have much to say on it ( i'll leave that to the pro's) but its realy good
May 25, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Eyes
wow. dude this was awesome. i really like how it was so unpredictable. keep writing i'd like to see what happens next
May 23, 2010