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Re: Tense
Wow. This actually describes how I feel in a twisted way. It's amazing. I really can't say anything because it's as perfect as a poem can be.
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: The Black Coats-1
Interesting chapter for your first one. I will agree that there were some sentences that didn't make much sense but you can fix them easily. For your first chapter, I ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: No Ordinary Girl
It's really good and I really like it but one thing, what's with this: All the magic and funcifififififfinvfivnrn
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Savior:Chapter Three
Another great chapter, I read the first two but I never responded. This is really getting good, I must know more! I'm really enjoying your story so far. I hope ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: A Poem of the True "Heart"
I really liked how you phrased this poem. It wasn't too light and airy yet it wasn't too dark and mysterious. It was just what I needed today(: I couldn't ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Cradle of Myth
I really liked this poem. The title got my attention and when I began reading I was hooked. I read it over three times and I have found nothing wrong ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: The Atman Callus
Wow, that's all I have to say. It's short but it says a lot with just those few lines. Really powerful, keep writing!!!(:
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Anger in the Faces of Many
I found this very well written. Keep it up!
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I?
Very thoughtful, I really enjoyed it, keep writing!
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: MY YWS
Very dedicated. I really like it, it really describes how I feel towards YWS as well.
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Trade Mistakes (1)
I found this very interesting and not bad overall. Couldn't find any mistakes, then again i haven't been on top of my game today, haha. Well, overall I really enjoyed ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Haze (Chapter One)
I really liked this overall. I couldn't find any mistakes and I saw what I was reading. It's very good and I can't wait until the next chapter!
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Demon of the sea:Chapter 5
I read the story from the beginning and was so happy when I finally saw the fifth chapter! Amazing(:
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 5)
I found it very intresting, I like the way how you continue off a chapter in just the right way.
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Keeper Chapter five
I read this before I read any of the other parts. I found it a little confusing so I went back and read the other chapters. I really like how ...
Aug 6, 2011
