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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tense

    Wow. This actually describes how I feel in a twisted way. It's amazing. I really can't say anything because it's as perfect as a poem can be.

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Black Coats-1

    Interesting chapter for your first one. I will agree that there were some sentences that didn't make much sense but you can fix them easily. For your first chapter, I ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No Ordinary Girl

    It's really good and I really like it but one thing, what's with this: All the magic and funcifififififfinvfivnrn

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Savior:Chapter Three

    Another great chapter, I read the first two but I never responded. This is really getting good, I must know more! I'm really enjoying your story so far. I hope ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Poem of the True "Heart"

    I really liked how you phrased this poem. It wasn't too light and airy yet it wasn't too dark and mysterious. It was just what I needed today(: I couldn't ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Cradle of Myth

    I really liked this poem. The title got my attention and when I began reading I was hooked. I read it over three times and I have found nothing wrong ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Atman Callus

    Wow, that's all I have to say. It's short but it says a lot with just those few lines. Really powerful, keep writing!!!(:

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Anger in the Faces of Many

    I found this very well written. Keep it up!

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Who Am I?

    Very thoughtful, I really enjoyed it, keep writing!

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: MY YWS

    Very dedicated. I really like it, it really describes how I feel towards YWS as well.

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Trade Mistakes (1)

    I found this very interesting and not bad overall. Couldn't find any mistakes, then again i haven't been on top of my game today, haha. Well, overall I really enjoyed ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Haze (Chapter One)

    I really liked this overall. I couldn't find any mistakes and I saw what I was reading. It's very good and I can't wait until the next chapter!

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demon of the sea:Chapter 5

    I read the story from the beginning and was so happy when I finally saw the fifth chapter! Amazing(:

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 5)

    I found it very intresting, I like the way how you continue off a chapter in just the right way.

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Keeper Chapter five

    I read this before I read any of the other parts. I found it a little confusing so I went back and read the other chapters. I really like how ...

    Aug 6, 2011


The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee; my heart is at your festival.
— William Shakespeare