WriteWriter

This piece is very inspiring and I found myself smiling and singing where this twelve year old was singing. i like the idea of the solstice and the candlelight and ...

Wow. This is a very well written piece and I don't see anything that needs to be fixed. i had a little trouble understanding it at first but by the ...

Wow. I'm really not so sure on how to review this when it's so beautiful. Every time you say "i" it needs to be capitalized. Never start a stanza or ...

Hello, I'm WriteWriter and I will be reviewing this poem. This poem really has nothing bad to talk about, it flowed with emotion and the words were just right in ...

Hey! So, I'm WriteWriter(WW) and I'll be reviewing you for today(: I love this poem and I could see the sadness of not being able to be harvested and not ...

I really enjoyed this and I'm interested in seeing what happens next. I found it however, interesting that the point of view seemingly comes from one man, and that this ...

Haha. I had to laugh at the end; I have never written and will never write a poem. Seems enough to point of the obvious that you indeed just wrote ...

This is really good. For some reason I get a sense that this or something close to it has happened to you. Though who am I to judge what is ...

This is so sweet and I love how you use the two science terms of electron and proton. That's way cool and it adds emphasis to the short story which ...

Wow. This is the perfect poem about poetry and words. I found nothing wrong with your layout or punctuation or grammar so overall that was very well done. As for ...

Wow. This isn't actually that bad, but however, because I have just started using this website a little while ago I'm still not really sure on what to do to ...

Wow. Very veyr very good. I love it! Please post Chapter 2! The Kaze boy sounds really mysterious and yet really awesome! I want to know more about what hapens ...

Wow. I love this chapter. It's probably my favorit chapter so far, other than he one where Liam and Alicia kiss. I really want Liam and Alicia to get together ...

Wow this so descries how I'm treated sometimes. It's a very strong poem and it gets the point across but I think the title is what really drew me in. ...

Hello, I guess I'm your reviwer. Lol(: This is an amazing poem and I really don't think you need to change anything. I like this poem the way it is. ...