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Re: Raining Tears
I'm aware that it doesn't reveal too much but that was kind of the point. You'll see what I mean later one. I start explaining more into the story. And ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: "It's the Rules!"
I looked up the book and OH MY GOD! I so didn't know that! That is so weird. So I'll put some twist into another chapter. But just wow. I ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Only in Your Dreams (Chapter 1: Part 1)
This is interesting. Definiatly something that I would read. Let me know when you add more to it.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Partly Lacy [Prologue/Chapter One]
This is good. It sucked me in right from the beggining. Let me know when you add more to it.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Lonarosa
This is good. I like how you give some background on your character. Let me know when you add more to it.
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Nikolina
This doesn't exactly reveal anything to use about the MC except she doesn't want to be at the castle P.S I think you could make a good StoryBook out of ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Words of Wisdom
Thanks to both of you. I appreciate it.
May 10, 2010