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Wondy

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Northern Lights - A Fox Tale

    STOP! REVIEW TIME! Your grammar and wording are mostly fine, except for some punctuation errors. What I would like to see is third-person narration, because I've seen *way* too much ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Burning

    Grammar: a few typos, but nothing too bad. Setting: School. 'Nuff said. Plot: guy falls asleep and dreams that his school was attacked by terrorists. Too rushed for me to ...

    Feb 15, 2015


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