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Re: homestuck fanfic: the pink blood {part one}
This is a very good story i like the idea and fandom. I like the set up,but it lack proper punctuation and some words are misspelled. I myself make mistakes ...
Nov 15, 2018 -
Re: Shadows...
This is great but you could use other words other than shadow. Maybe like cover or shade, there are plenty others. I feel like a few words are a little ...
Nov 12, 2018