Wolferion

Edited =) I think it should be a little bit less confusing now ( In more accurate meaning, it shall limit the variety of questions that appear ), also I've ...

Many thanks to both of you =) I believe I've corrected the dialogue mistakes, I hope all of them. Also I've changed many of the ... to - in the ...

Grammar? Darn, I checked it two times and found no mistakes... I guess my FCE level of English ain't enough yet >:0 . Thanks a lot for sharing your experience, ...

I did expect people to get bored over my scenario anyway, so no harsh feeling ^^ I'm still trying to get that "show more than tell" and "keep it interesting" ...

Thanks to the LezeleanWitch's help, the prologue final fix is done and posted :) ( I edited whole first post by the newer version ). Now I believe I need ...

I gave you a gold star for this, there's no need for me to review anything =) Amazing piece of work, keep writing!

Thanks for the comment Ninett =) With a little bit better knowledge at writing poems I'll try to write another poem this week. I hope I won't mess it up ...

I've edited the first post =) I honestly hope It's better now.

I have to admit it's written nice. I imagined the mirror breaking, blood spilling, comparisons you wrote and so on. The only trouble is that it felt a bit a ...

I agree with both AquaMarine and Kamas, the repeating questions made me stop for a moment. The subject is interesting and despite the constant questions you wrote it well from ...

I had to reread it twice to understand the whole, but in the end, I'm quite amazed. That's a great piece of work about alcoholics, keep writing!

Thanks everybody for your opinions =) I've got a lot of subjects to study for, it's January, a lot of exams coming up, so I'll try my best to make ...

Heh xD Never heard that song or read another poetry about leaves. Anyway , point taken =) Once I'll feel like writing poetry again as a break from writing normal ...

Thanks a lot for the comment! I changed the last line in the first stanza, not much but should be better, I think ^^

I'm not really good at correcting literal works so I'll simply tell my opinion as your work was already reviewed, I found the story pretty interesting, the idea is a ...