Wolferion

Cheers! Let's get to it =) I've put your story into the spoiler along with my impressions, notes and corrections. Below the spoiler is my overall. Ela crawled through the ...

Now then, let's get it done. ‘...and then he told me to be ready to proceed at a moment’s notice and showed me out.’ - It's odd to start the ...

Continuing right from the 1st chapter =) Same scheme. The piano stool scraped back across the floor as I stood up. ‘Are you out of your mind?’ I demanded. ‘To ...

Hiya! =) I'll review all three when I get the time, for the time being let's get through this one. I've put my impressions, notes and the likes in the ...

Hiya! :) Let's get to business, shall we? The story's in spoiler along with my commentaries and impressions. The wind blows in from the little crack in the window. Its ...

Cheers! Let's get to bussiness, shall we? =) I've put your work into the spoiler, you can find my comments bellow your paragraphs and please, if it might seem too ...

Cheers! Let's get to bussiness, shall we? The imaginery you use here is rather good with its simplicity, there's no need to crack one's mind nor spend too much time ...

Yousu! Let's get to business, shall we? =) The story is in the spoiler below with my comments. His hands touched the book delicately. Even through his armor he felt ...

Cheers! I'm here to help you out as I'm quite acquitted with the 40k series =) Awesome games. I've put your story into the spoiler and my thoughts/impressions are in ...

Ohayou Violet! Former team member here to review :) I've put your story into spoilers, my comments are below paragraphs to give you a comment in specific places. I shake ...

Ohayou, I'm here to review, so let's get to it =). I've put your story into "spoiler" with my comments beneath paragraphs. He watched her letter burn in the darkness. ...

Hiya! I'm here to review, so lets get to it. I'll start by giving my comments to your paragrapsh and fixing whatever I find disturbing, alright? :) The story is ...

Cheers! I'm here to review, so let's get to it. The sword twirled between my fingers, keeping pace with my rapidly beating heart. I was now on the run and ...

Cheers! I've come to help you out with 0 posts =) I've finished reading this in one go without a need to reread it, which is in fact not a ...

I wonder if people didn't post here much because of the story's length or its quality. I haven't had such a good read in some time for sure, which I ...