Wolfdra

Wow, how very tramatic. Did this happen to you, or was it just something you came up with? A "what if" moment, as it were? All the same, I did ...

I'm going to be giving you a review! It will probably be a little harsh, so if I do offend you, I'm sorry. It's only to make you better. Now, ...

I understand how close this must be to your heart, considering that this is a true story on them. It makes it hard to give a review, but I'll try. ...

I liked reading it, I didn't see a whole lot of mistakes. Though, I do agree with Justtrying, you should cut out some of it and maybe change it around. ...

My only quarrel with it is that, if he has no education, how is it that he's writing this, speaking to us? Did he teach himself to do it? Did ...

I'd love to give you a review, and I have read the whole thing, but it's just so long! I'm not saying that it's a bad thing [though for a ...

You, my friend, were successful in actually making me cry. I've read only a few that are actually able to do that. I applaude you. I liked how you did ...

Wow, that's kinda kiling my eyes to read because of the lack of paragraphs. But, I've read it and so I'll sat that it REALLY needs it. If you don't ...

I, myself, am truly jaded against America, much in the same fashion as you. I never really felt anything towards America when I was younger, but like you [if these ...

Man I love this. And I hate girls that do bring back guys, even when they've been assholes and everything else, just to end up hurting them again. Is it ...

Wow, I loved this. I had read when you posted in the welcome area, and so I wanted to look into one of your works. I wasn't disappointed. I saw ...

First off, this is wonderfully cute. I love this so much. I didn't really see anything wrong with how you worded it, or how the puntuation was placed, it all ...

That was just awesome, okay? It's pretty much the truth, too. XP A lot of girls have that view about guys who are, well, assholes. I've never had that view, ...

Very, very nice. There really isn't anything that I can pick out, you've done it really well. I loved how you explained Robert's problems, and how Sarah, his wife, was ...

I really loved this piece, so I thought I'd give you a review! --- Everything in the piece was really good, very emotional without being overly so. You could really ...