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:oops: Hey, you know you can edit your posts?

No problem... I just re-read my reviews; I sound really mean though! :(

Yeah, you can RP. But I won't have the time; I'm too busy with my story :( Anyways, we shouldn't be chatting on these forums!

No prob Gwen :D Sorry if I sounded parent-ish but people probably aren't going to review your work because the dialogue is all mixed up with the text and it ...

A couple more things... You said: A chill of early morning summer sent a wave of pleasure through the villagers of Moonlight Valley. The warm suns glow rimed the treetops ...

Thanks Gwen! :D You should write something so I can review it! Pwease!

I agree with Kyte! But aren't those characters from Eragon and Eldest? I don't think it will be included in a book, because it is Christopher Paolini's ideas and characters...

Thanks^^ I was just having a discouraged moment :lol: I mentioned that she was beautiful (more about that in the rest of the book; she's an elf) Alas, I am ...

No kidding^^ Well...maybe I'm not cut out to be an author? So far; my characters are uninteresting, my magical phenomenons are too "speshul", my scenes are cliche and only one ...

^^ Thanks! This is a part of a chapter in my book...you can see more here:

Oh. :oops: Well, I'll just go and review some stuff...:roll: I didn't think of it being cliche..I just thought one night that maybe I should make the scene where she ...

Ouch. Lay off, will you? I'm only 12! I mean, I appreciate your review, but don't you have any constructive critisism? Anything that you liked about it? I'm sorry if ...

Thanks! I'll just go edit some things ^^ P.s.- I adore running at night too!

Nice! I think it flows nicely, and I admire your use of descriptive language. Well done!

I'm sorry, but I have to go. :( My annoying neighbour came over to hog the computer *angry*