WintryOz

This is really shocking news! I knew homosexuality iss considered a crime in Russia, but I didn't know the consequences were so extreme. My heart goes out to the Russian ...

I like the concept of a bard telling the story, but sometimes, the voice gets too ramblish, like for instance - when you talk about your characters. That much of ...

This is a very meaningful poem. I really love the way you have expressed the soldier's internal battle. I was expecting a veteran of the Vietnam War or something, but ...

First of all, I find books which begin with so much history and backstory very off-putting. The prologue, I think should be action-filled, and should draw the reader in, give ...

This piece is very well penned, and I do like your descriptions, but somehow, I thought it was a bit ramblish. I mean, if I read each scene bit by ...

Your use of the phrase "sky blue sky" is very cool :) It reminds me of the song by Wilco with the same name. (sky blue sky) I would suggest ...

This is a beautiful concept. I've never thought of it this way before - personifying time and making it take offence at the clock's ticking. I think you ought to ...

This poem is absolutely beautiful

This is a very simple, but meaningful poem. I think it's something every aspiring writer can relate to. It's well penned too :) By the way, I think in line ...