Winter257

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration. :D

I think I'll change that line, per your suggestion, and another reviwer's. I agree, it does seem a bit awkward. Thanks so much for your positive review! :)

Thank you for reviewing! I'll definitely consider your suggestions. I was worried about that when I wrote it, but I just kinda went with it xD anyway, thanks again!

Don't scrap it xD even if it sounds similar, I'm sure it'll be unique to your writing, so I'd feel badly if you scrapped it over my poem o:

I've never been one to seretly admire others, though it did help a ton to imagine I was the narrator. It took a lot to bring out the obsessive creep ...

Hello there, gonna comment on this quickly! Overall, I liked your poem. The only thing that bothered me was the last line. It's slightly longer than the rest, and it ...

Thank you so much! Im glad you enjoyed it, and could relate. Your positivity is very much appreciated, as well. :D

No problem! In case you don't know, just click the edit submission button, and you should be able to rename your poem. :D

Thank you for reviewing! I was honestly worried as to how people might take the reveal, so I'm rather happy that it seems to have worked out for this story. ...

Thank you so much for your review! :)

If you post your poem here, let me know! I'll be sure to give it a look. I love poetry based on reality. It's the best kind, especially when it ...

I'm so glad you liked and understood this! The first review wasn't so good, so I was very concerned that nobody would understand what I was trying to say. And ...

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate your positivity. :)

Thank you so much for your review! I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration, as I agree with what you mentioned. Thanks again! :)

It wasn't too confusing, just a bit of a hard time tracking dialogue. And no problem, you're a great writer! :)