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Re: we leaves
I like the truth that the poem speaks, you did a good job on that. It is a short poem, but it is long enough to have its purpose. I ...
Jul 4, 2016 -
Re: "You're not that beautiful."
I love this poem so much! if I'm taking it in right, then I can totally relate! I would maybe try going "in my wildest visions, and my craziest nightmares". ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Bathing
I had a splendid time reading this! Unlike some other stories I've read, it keeps my attention from drifting off. You did really well at the decription of things, as ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me Not
I do really like this story. Indeed I do, I did notice your amazing job of describing things that wanted to be described. I also liked the way it ends. ...
Mar 29, 2016
