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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Forgotten Yet Remembered

    Hi, Reunixxce, Your poem is very nice. As well as being a great and enjoyable read. I liked how the speaker is shown to have regularly thought of and longed ...

    Jul 15, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: draft of a short story

    Hi, Lolita18, Your story opens with the narrator likely in some form of distress. We, the readers, are immediately made aware that this is a repeated experience. I also felt ...

    Jul 15, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Confessions from a Girl Who Can't Sleep

    Hi, Valkyria, Your poem is very enjoyable, taking the common experience of not being able to sleep and putting it to words. When you state, "Turn your mind off... My ...

    Jul 15, 2024


As if you were on fire from within. The moon lives in the lining of your skin.
— Pablo Neruda