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Re: Forgotten Yet Remembered
Hi, Reunixxce, Your poem is very nice. As well as being a great and enjoyable read. I liked how the speaker is shown to have regularly thought of and longed ...
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Re: draft of a short story
Hi, Lolita18, Your story opens with the narrator likely in some form of distress. We, the readers, are immediately made aware that this is a repeated experience. I also felt ...
Jul 15, 2024 -
Re: Confessions from a Girl Who Can't Sleep
Hi, Valkyria, Your poem is very enjoyable, taking the common experience of not being able to sleep and putting it to words. When you state, "Turn your mind off... My ...
Jul 15, 2024
