WillowPaw1

Congratulations on your entry! Okay, so there were only a few nitpicks, and I'll quickly point those out. Blood pounds through my veins, twisting and running throug the complicated swirls ...

Hi! [Notice: This is second chapter. I am not good at writing novels or making better sentences. I tried my best on this chapter.] Awh, don't say that! Feel confident ...

Hi again! This is getting much more realistic! The action of Grace wanting to know and whining and complaining is a very realistic, but them telling her, No, you won't ...

Hey there! :) Cool message you sent there. Is was easy and clear to make out, which I think is a good thing, but you want something to think about ...

Hi! Wow- I've never thought about this, like, at all. I love it, though! I love the uniqueness about it, too. That would be truly amazing if I could catch ...

Hey dogsrule5! I'm back! By the way - quick with getting this out. I just reviewed your previous chapter yesturday. Nice! Anyways-the review. I cant because I am not a ...

Hi there, Em! Wow, next chapter already? So, in this chapter, I have a problem with punctuation and that is the use of those dashes. For example; Stormcloud had a ...

Hi there! You said you need some help with punctuation, so I'll try my best to do that... First, though, some quick little pointers... I'm sure to some other lonely, ...

Hi! Woah. 0.0 Intenste chapter man. Rease shoulda like totally kicked Sadie in the stomach and been like HIIII-YA! Except that would totally be out of character sooo.... Anyways, nitpicks ...

Hi again! The boy had short white hair, that was in a mess. Clip the comma. The voice was shaky, and scared. Clip the comma. , and the papers on ...

Hi! Ugh, totally missed these past chapters! Okay, lets get onto the review. The girls curls were bouncing up and down. Girl's (it's showing possession, but you probably already know ...

Hey! All right, so, I'm pretty speechless about this chapter. For one, no nitpicks (that usually happens anyways), and for two, such a dramatic chapter! It seems as though I'm ...

Hi again! Okay, I feel like I've been kinda harsh in my previous reviews, this one's ganna be a little nicer, but that's also because I think this is one ...

Mkay... Hi, there, I'm going to give you a very short review. From the Atlantic Ocean to A magic carpet ride. I'm not completely sure you can travel to a ...

Hi. Okay... YESH! YESH! I feel the exact same way about this. For one, I don't want to be popular. Not at all! Popular = too much attention. Too much ...