WillowPaw1

Hello, Em101cats! Hmm... Yes... This is a very interesting piece! It is also so easy to relate to it. Like, sometimes my parents tell me to do something, and I ...

Hello, there! Now at first I'm just like: These princesses used to be fairy tales once balh blah some other stuff until I saw the ending! I like how it's ...

Hi, Wolfare! Nitpicks (really minor) Like the previous day, I image the sparkling blue pool, and I notice my palms heating up. I think you meant imagine? Or maybe you ...

Hey, KayKayKoala! It's me again! ^.^ I have sympathy towards this person, and that is great! That's what you want a poem to do, to make you feel emtional. It ...

Hi, there! Welcome to YWS! Wow, two works already? Nice! ^.^ Okay, let's start on this review. Nitpicks... of all the things that are untrue her grey skies aren't turning ...

Hi, moneypowerglory and I want to say... Welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* We hope you like it here. ;) Ahem. I really loved this poem! It was so realistic, and ...

Hi, Raven! WillowPaw here to review chapter 12 for you! ^.^ There were quite a few errors, and since everyone else has mostly pointed them all out, I won't spend ...

Hey! Willow here for another review! I think Wolf struck on a big point, which is the details. Describing what the dragons look like would be so much more helpful ...

Hi! :) I haven't read previous chapters, but I'll review all chapters after this. Nitpicks I walk up to the warm fire and she looks frightened for a second and ...

Hey, puppys! I'm going to skip with grammar and punctuation, since most people have gotten that done. So! I agree with treepelt here: I love how you're making a fan ...

Hi! All right, let's start the review! I've already read the first chapter, but it had three or so reviews already so yup. :D First of all: in your title, ...

Hi, MargoSuess, and welcomeeeeee to YWS! *throws confetti* Ahem. Wow, I seriously loved this. The randomness and humor was amazing. I liked how you stinky feet just so happened to ...

Hi, again! Nitpicks "If we make it out here alive, would you go out with me." "Sure" I said. The first line is a question, and after Sure there needs ...

All right. Everyone has pretty much summed this up for me. Slow it down. So, first she's talking about following her dad's footsteps... Then boom they win the battle. Like... ...

Hi, dogs! Yay, new story! :) First of all, I recommend you edit the nitpicks others have pointed out for you, since they went to all of that work. I'm ...