WillowPaw1

Gahhhhhh how in the world could you do this to us? You meanie. -.- Just kidding. But seriously, that was an amazing cliffhanger ;) Rease looked at the grey shirt ...

Hey Raven!! All righty. I agree with Wolf here. Marcy. I was very confused, but then once I read on I was able to find out Marcy had been her ...

Hi, dogs! Wow! Seems like you got the nitpicks down! I didn't spot a single error. Now, when I was reading this, what urked me was just the style of ...

Hey, I'm just ganna leave you a short review! Okay. There's this little issue right here... To block out the things, that I don't want to see. Okay, so, right ...

Hey, Em! I haven't got up with your work! Oh no. 0.0 All right. And my cats must think I'm crazy I would take the "and" out. Conjunctions aren't normally ...

Hey, Raven! All righty! Her upper arm was pinched, rough hands hurting her even further. Rease’s lovely snapped open, she could see Kase and Kylan. Little confused here... Did she ...

Hey, Wolf! Wolfe seems to get all the nitpicks, and besides the ones he caught there was like one really minor one that I probably won't be able to find ...

Hey, dogs! Long time now see! Now let's start with the things I liked. 1. Your writing style is getting better, and each sentence is beginning to be much more ...

Hey hey hey! :) Kay, so this first part is just gonna be lil ol me pointing a few things out. “It definitely puts that tiny Willow of yours to ...

Hi, the writer! A/N: So this is a poem I wrote off of the top of my head. So I'm sure you guys can make it better and more powerful. ...

Hi, there! I'm finally here as requested. :) All righty. I live in the year 2218, but it’s not like you would expect with hover cars and robots and holograms ...

Hi, there, here as requested. Okay, so since you've already got 8 reviews, I can't offer much since everyone else has already covered it, but I'll just mention a few ...

Heyo, Wolf! Let's get this review off my review list. :) “Even though you’re in Gylinda, doesn’t mean you can’t lose control.” I think you're missing a word here. Putting ...

Hi, writer! I finally finished reading! So yes: it was lengthy, and like you said, it might be better if you chopped each chapter in two, so there were two ...

Hi, there! I found two nitpicks, one at the beginning where there were too many spaces between two words, and on the last line: fire work is one word. I ...