WillowCutz

Oh! I get it now, the reason the person robbing the purse didn't steal all the money is because he must have say the ribbon or the body and realized ...

EVERYTHING FROM HERE DOWN IS FROM A PAST POEM THAT OCCUPIED THIS SPOT! PLEASE MOURN THE PAST POEM! IF YOU DON'T IT PROBABLY won't HAUNT YOU TONIGHT! BUT IT'S BETTER ...

I liked reading about the everyday life living with Sherlock, but why a dragon Tattoo? Out of all the things to tattoo, why a dragon? Is it a symbol for ...

The jumping down part seemed a bit over kill, but I enjoyed it. Why a ribbon? That would make it some sort of group or cult, there is no reason ...

Loved it! Trying a little too hard to be modern. But I LOVED IT. HAVE YOU SEEN Sherlock?

Hee-hee, I made a word up! :D

Editation DONE!

Seperate this into paragraphs and I'll read it :D

In my Opinion it's best to tell the story from point of veiw of the person who the scene means the most to. That's why I switch from me telling ...

Point of veiw is who's telling the story (i.e. not nessisarily the character's point of veiw) I mean just look at Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling is telling the story!

Actually the italic HE is not refering to my crush, rather his crush, so that's why I used Italics

Well first of all: it's in the third person, so I actually can jump from place to place to experience different settings. Secondly and Two: yes he's been on dates ...

Hmmm... it seems I hit the button twice. Whoops!

I wrote the answers on my eraser for my spelling tests and for math tests they were self graded so I just said that I got a higher grade than ...

I wrote the answers on my eraser for my spelling tests and for math tests they were self graded so I just said that I got a higher grade than ...