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Aww thanks guys! :D

That was BEAUTIFUL Jenna! I really liked how you used second person. It was a nice change to normal writing. Very deep and moving too. Nice job!

Beautiful gummy, just beautiful. I liked how it was much clearer language than your other poems. Nice job.

Great job! It had kinda weird rhythm, but loved overall! No crit.

Very, very good. I give you a hearty congrats on a master poem!

Um...have to agree with everyone else here. I know you're a great poet, but I'd have to say this wasn't one of your better attempts. It was just too... blunt ...

Thanks everyone for the critiques! I really appreciate it! In regards to the comments about having "dance" twice in each stanza, that was kind of what I had based my ...

Before, I posted a poem that didn't go over so well :x , so I tried my hand at another one, and I hope this showed more emotion. It's actually ...

I loved this captured the emotions so well. You have great talent. Need I say more? Mary :wink:

Thanks Inertia! After reading over the poem again, it really is dry. I guess I'll just store this in the archives of my memory...thank you soooo much for your advice. ...

This is a poem I wrote about a year ago, so it might not be as good as other ones I have written. I really would like some feedback on ...