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Re: Ascent Chapter 2
So shmookie poo lets review! one thing I noticed is that you are very sitcomy about your writing style and that may lead people to think their world is too ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: Trouble in the Halls(Fair warning-Triggering scenes read at your own risk)
Okay I like stories like these because they get down to the root of things and they are raw and truthful. Most people on here who write romance talk about ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Ascent Chapter 1
So I like this. A lot. I have been trying and trying to get this kind of writing stylefor quite sometime now, and I seriously want to meet you colab ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: You are an Ocean
Heya Whosabell13 here for a review. I dont usually read and review poems but you really caught my attention when you started making all of the words relate to each ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: dIrTy knEEs, clOuDy sKiEs
Yes I aggree with everyone else this is pretty weird and pretty uniqe. I love that you choose unicorns for your first story and that you turned into one. The ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: High school Romance
That was a very high school story. I love it! You need to work on the deatails of the people more and not the surroundings. Add a little umph to ...
Sep 21, 2015