WhiteTiger93

Well I really liked this. I was interested from the begining. I can't really reveiw it at the moment (school) ): but as soon as I get home I'll give ...

I'll come back later on to fully review this, but I can do the little things now. I think this is extremely interesting. I really like your main character and ...

Well, since someone already reviewed before me, I'll just tell you that I really liked it! (: I think you have a good idea going, and I loved the description. ...

Interesting. I think I'll reveiw this (: Fights, death, and blood. All of these words have something in common and all depend on each other. If there's a fight there ...

Here I am to review, as requested. First, I had never read the book, but I think I understand it pretty well. Second, this was very good. I liked the ...

Hey, I am Tiger and I will be your reviewer today. (: First, I would love to say that I love this. There was a couple errors, but I really ...

Hey. I read your story and it sounded pretty good. I noticed quite a bit of grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. The other reveiwers prettymuch covered them anyway. ...

Hilarious. I totally hate Stephenie Meyer's Twilight. King was right when he said she couldn't write worth a darn. Anyway, this is about your story. I loved it. A few ...

Okay, I liked this. Interesting, but... it kind of freaked me out. I'm sorry but you described those demon-creatures really well and they give me the creeps. Also, I liked ...

Well, everyone got all of your grammatical errors, but after reading this, I couldn't just skip over it. I loved it. I understand that this is a prologue and it's ...

I thought that this was pretty good. It's intriguing, which is good(Duh). (: There weren't too many grammatical errors, but I'm not very good at catching them. Everyone else got ...

Well, this was interesting. (: It caught my attention at once ad kept me there. The begining kind of confused me, but I figured it out after re-reading it. I ...

Okay, first things fisrt. This is your best peice of writing Shella. It's better than the stroy you let me read in class and certainly more orignal. Thank God it's ...

I would just like to say well done. I really liked how you started it out with a lot of desciption and such. It caught me at the very begining. ...

Okay, I am going to be brutally honest with you. I really didn't like it. I think that the writing needs some work as does the story line. “Moll? You ...