WhisperInTheWind

Roon has already picked out the errors, so can I mention the good things? One word, beautiful. You're strong and independent in your work. It shows just how awesome you ...

Beautiful! Shows brilliance in a brilliant poet! Simply amazed me - your talent truly did. I loved everything about this piece. No criticism. Take care.

June! Hey I'm excited, so let's cut to the chase! I thought this was a brilliant work - short, and definitely sweet. Nice little poem with a wonderful personal touch. ...

Fabulous! Just an awesome read and sure brings a smile... Keep it up cause you rock XD

Nice! I loved it - simply awesome! Your personal touch highlights your talent and it is obvious you're Pulitzer in the making! I loved the rhythm and the words. Keep ...

That was a good fan fiction. I liked all the hard work and emotions put through it. You're good. And Rowling is the best. As a fellow Potter fan, I ...

Saramander that was really nice of you! Thanks! I will try out your recommendations

Hey Andy, thank you for your review. In my defence I would say, this is just an essay. I never meant for it to be a story with characters. But ...