Whatsarahsaid

"Your voice is shaking me down. Tomorrow and next week.." I'm still unaware of how to quote with html. I really love this imagery, its really unexpected, original. I have ...

I understand what your'e trying to say. We have so much fear, of everything that we create our own "perfect" world with plenty of manicured lawns and decking. But this ...

You've captured something about young love, I'm not sure if i can pinpoint it. I love the drowning/water theme. The description was mostly utterly amazing but the way you describe ...

Beautiful, I love this. "You revealed your love for me I’m taken by the metal droplets And the acidic taste of rain Leaden fingers on my hips, I taste You ...

I'm not very familiar with styles of poetry, but if that's abstract that's what I like to read! It's very clever and casts so many thoughts, a bit too clever ...

I'm not going to talk about the rhyming scheme because I'd absolutely have no bloody idea what I was talking about so here are my thoughts on the rest: I ...

You shouldn't really need to explain the poem, a habit I know I do it myself. It was beautiful, hands are very expressive. Agreeing with PsyLynx, the impression of falling ...

I loved it, the language is so sharp and coarse. I'm not sure I understood it, I did try! "and why the cage? pride binds my words fast, .....and silences ...

The rhyming was slightly forced. But I welcome anyone who can write rhyming poetry, since I have never been able to! I do like thos verse though; "He fought and ...

[size=18] There's quite a few references to other things other than dumping and fucking your family members, but I don't know quite what! I do like "her mannequin body at ...

I liked it alot especially the "he tells abstract stories about nothing in particular with only his fingers and the ivories." Travis is very vunerable isn't he? Misunderstood, really the ...

I love this, especially the description of him tapping rhythically on the table. You can tell a story so simply but so well, I like the way you mention every ...