Werthan

Thanks! The wolf symbolism wasn't "thrown in", but was actually the inspiration for the story, so it surprises me that you thought it was thrown in. "Tougher" might be the ...

Thanks. I don't think this copied and pasted well and I'll go back and edit that a bit.

Thanks. This was supposed to be experimental so I'll have to work out which parts people just consider bad vs. which parts need some tweaking to work.

Thanks. This was actually sort of experimental, since it was intended to be basically Expressionistic and that movement didn't really leave Continental Europe and Scandinavia (despite being now over 1

OK.

You're welcome!

Thanks! Yeah, I need to rework the names as well. The double r *is* rolled (the single one is tapped, there are also a whole bunch of other rules on ...

Thanks! I already have it all planned out, just the intro is a bit rough and probably needs re-working.

Thanks for the review!

I'll change "culture" to "sci-fi" if gadgets really are more unusual in spy stories that Russians are :p

@EvangelineFire Thank you! As I said, this is basically just a set-up for everything else that happens, hence alll his wandering thoughts being used as exposition (probably poorly, but I ...

@EvangelineFire Anyways, do you have any ideas for how to tweak what the character said? I think the best solution is to just make it sarcastic but then the court ...

@EvangelineFire Yeah, there were italics originally but they got taken out when I published it here :p

Thanks. I'll try to fix up the style a bit more but you need to keep in mind that this guy's thoughts are deliberately rather unreliable, which doesn't come through ...

It says 84 winters. Does that change anything? There are a lot of loose-r associations but I kind of like that really.