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Re: Doomed Insurgent - Sestina
Thank you! You too.
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Out of Sight
Of course. And thank you.
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Doomed Insurgent - Sestina
Thank you!
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Doomed Insurgent - Sestina
Thank you so much! The eternal warrior of the reviewer is reviewing a style they don't prefer but thank you for giving it your all. I wrote this to be ...
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: The Revolutionaries Chapter One: Malvis
Thank you so much! I%u2019ll keep that in mind.
Aug 22, 2021 -
Re: Olympic Somonka: The Mirror
This poem was written specifically for the event going on right now: The YWS Olympics.
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Olympic Somonka: The Mirror
I%u2019m not quite sure what you mean.
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Olympic Somonka: The Mirror
Thank you so much for the review! While I agree this format is perfect for representing a reflection, it%u2019s actually a Japanese style! It was really fun to write and ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Gold
Oh, wow! Thank you so much for the review.
Jul 15, 2021 -
Re: you aren't in love, you're just lonely
Beautiful poem, chikara!
Jul 11, 2021 -
Re: Love You Back
Thank you for the review!
Jul 9, 2021 -
Re: Love You Back
You guessed precisely how I planned this song. The start would be all sweet and cheesy, pianos and drawn out words. Then, everything would stop for just a moment before ...
Jul 8, 2021 -
Re: ...
To make this clearer, I would suggest adding a transition. Maybe saying that, the cheers turned into screams%u2014the blue and green stained with red. There%u2019s a lot of ways to ...
Jul 8, 2021 -
Re: Gold
You too!
Jul 7, 2021 -
Re: Not The Best
Oh, I like that! Nice change.
Jul 7, 2021
