WaywardBird

hmm... I like this idea... Yes, I say, I like this idea very much, reminded me of Ender's Game. But, It was a bit hard to follow, which is simple ...

Dude, I hate the color orange too. Orange is the color of inmates that have had a terrible twist in their destiny or twisted it themselves. Orange is the color ...

Now, children, it's time for.... THE GRAMMAR NAZI ! D:| Dude! I cannot stress enough the importance of good grammar! Especially when you're first starting out, when all the critics ...

I think it's too short. I like the ending and all, but there's not enough metaphors or comparisons to really know what went down. Was the man illegitamate? Did his ...

'Ello, I'm here to destory your carefully written story. ( Sorry. :) ) 1. I get confused as to the theme of this story, wether it's a fairy tale or ...

First off, I liked the title. It grabbed me from the homepage, and a good title is probably one of the most important things to a story; otherwise you don't ...

LOVED this song. Jeez, wish this were on the radio instead of... say... Justin Beiber? I can almost hear the music, it's lovely stuff. Keep on truckin! It's got much ...

AAWWSSOMMME! Well, perhaps most of it is on my part, because i just love this period in history. At least, I'm guessing it's supposed to be late victorian era? Liked ...

I liked the wording of this poem, it was very picturesque and slow and calming. My only issue with it is that the last paragraph seems out of place. I ...

60 words look hard to do, so I give you credit for even trying :) Alone at last- seemed too brunt, although you kind of have to be for the ...

i shall now commence to rudely rip apart your carefully planned story. (Sorry,) 1. (This is mostly me being a prick- don't pay too much attention! :) ) As I ...

At the beggining of this story, the guards don't sound enthusastic to obey Sergent McClellan, when he is supposed to be a great leader. Perhaps a little bit more haggard ...

I didn't eye-bleed, if that's what your wondering. I think that the spacing should be consecutive throughout the poem, because it didn't seem to change any tempo and this might ...

Ug, I can FEEL the potential in this story, but I'm afraid there are two points that bothered me. 1: I don't think Caleb could have an accent if he ...

I just finished QUIT YOUR JOB. BECOME A TRAPIZE ARTIST and so I duly had to check out more of your stories, and become a follower. The wide spaces between ...