WaterCheetah

this poem is very helpful because I am writing a poem and this can give me very good ideas for my next poem. I like how you used asked question ...

this story makes me feel like I am there I the story and I like how you use so much detail in the story and wow... I just can't say ...

I like it. A great piece of art and you will make my life for poems a great deal...

its free verse btw. and its my poem okay??? and thx for your advice.... :) :) :)

its personification if you know and I think it just great.... and thx for your advice.. I will take it to my next poem writing :) :)