Wariofart

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind while re-writing.

Thanks! Reading over the line again, I have no idea myself, I'll rewrite it. And I'll just say, that the Preacher isn't me preaching and it'll become important later. Glad ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the world and magic. And yeah, looking back I can see that the first episode seems a bit aimless. This is really ...

Thanks for the review and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it and felt something, that's the reason why I write. :) And really, you're first short story you've read involving ...

Thanks for writing such a detailed review! I'll definitely consider all your suggestions.

Thanks! And no, that much have been a weird typing error, I'll try editing it. As for the end, this was written as an English assignment, so I may have ...

Thanks for the review. I think it was very valid, and I'll try and re-do that ending as reading it back I can see what you're saying.

edit: idk why this blank comment appeared. And I don't know how to delete it either! Sorry about that.

Thanks so much for all your reviews and Likes. I tried to take your suggestions. I added another line so all the verses have four lines except the last one, ...

Hey, thanks for the reviews! I added a middle part to it, to try and flesh out the characters a little more. Please tell me how you think of it. ...

Wow, I had no idea this would get so many reviews! Thank you all, it helped a lot. I just wrote this one day in math class, and didn't really ...

I'm definitely doing it, user is the same as this one. But only three days??? I've got my plot, some characters, and a fuzzy outline. Must....outline...more...

That's a great haiku So I'll write this short review I liked it a lot!

hi I liked the chapter. I think that you should make this more clear like if she can go to school and at work then why they can't go alone ...

Okay, thanks to everyone who edited my story, I've updated and edited it, so hopefully all the mistakes are gone. Thanks again!