Wanderer777

“Maxenne, go take the fish up to town. You shouldn’t always have to be told. Once a week, that’s all we ask of you,” Havi ordered her daughter from the ...

Max sat in the wagon beside her pets, the sun high in the sky. Epona pranced happily down the road, Cackle sung in his dragon voice and Malto lay sleeping ...

“Fish day! Wake up sleepies!” Max called, bounding happily into her room and opening the window. It was a couple of weeks later and Max had finally saved up enough ...

“Someone catch that horse!” Max shouted at the top her voice. “He’s heading for the beach!” She pretended to run out of breath and stopped, stifling a laugh as she ...

I had a little difficulties in writing the scene with Fanor. To me it seems a little...stiff I guess. And right after the bar fight seemed blah, but that's my ...

I'm not at all pleased with what I'm writing (especially this part...it's so boring to me) so please tell me if it sounds good. And I hope it isn't too ...