WaltzingDreams

Thank you for the feedback! :)

you're welcome.

Thank you, thanks!

And precision and delusion does rhyme. As an eye and scarce rhyme...

Thanks for the feedback! Will take note next time.

Do i feel what i wrote in the poem? Yes and no, unfortunately. I still have more ideas for a stanza, elaborating into something deeper, but then i learned that ...

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Hey Raging! Thanks for the review and your time in reading this little poem. %uD83D%uDE0A Yeah, and the varying rhyme schemes and rhythm was intentional. I wanted to bring out ...

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it! :D

Thank you so much for the review! I was beginning to think this poem would never reach any recognition, rotting in the green room! Thanks for your time and review ...

Thanks for the review! I'll put all your suggestions in, thanks for pointing all the errors out! :-)

No thanks, I'm good. :) Haha, joke! I'd love a technical and story review on this one

You're asking me if I want you to review one of my works? I'm not really sure if your question is directed to me. (My brain is not functioning well. ...

Haha! Glad you thought about it SO MUCH, but as I said, it's true. All the things I went through as indicated here is true. Watch out for teachers like ...