WallFlower

Wow. This poem has such an impact with not so many words. The moral is very true. Your point gets clearly across, and the use of the "princess" not only ...

Beautifully painful. Your rhythm was good; it flowed with ease. The wind was great use of imagery. The only thing I would change... You then talk to others, Like nothing ...

Hi :) That was so bittersweet. Beautifully written, too. It almost made me cry. The plot was very original. I was expecting a "their-eyes-met-and-they-knew-it-was-love" kind of story, so the ending ...

Oh my goodness!! Wow. That was... unexpected. To me, it seems a little extreme that Dave would kill her because of an overabundance of questions. Demands? Maybe. Questions? I don't ...

Wow. This is powerful. The fact that you didn't even give your characters names makes it more personal. They could be us. Your writing flows so easily. No choppiness, no ...