WaitingForLife

Hey, thanks for the review! :) Yeah, I figured myself that the 4-5-4-5 stanzas might cut the flow, but I felt like trying it out. Now I'll delete that and ...

Nice try and good evidence supporting your answer, but I'm afraid the Black Sea is incorrect. ^^ That been said, you were correct in assuming it's the color spectrum. Also, ...

Haha, no sweat Mazey. ^^ It's not like I'm forcing you to read these so that you have to apologize for not reading it sooner. And how could you survive ...

Thanks! :) I suggest the use of a thesaurus to spice up your language. You can find a free one on the internet, no sweat. And I'd be mildly surprised ...

Hey, Spitfire, thanks for the review. :) Oh, thanks for pointing out the bleeding nose part. I added it in after posting, so I forgot to mention it again later ...

Alright, I guess I'll do just that then. ^^ I was just thinking that it would seem, ah, I can't find a word for it. As I've already posted them ...

I just noticed that I never actually responded to anyone commenting on this... Ah, the days of an arrogant young writer... Better late than never I guess, so THANK YOU ...

Heya, thanks for the advice! :) In response to your suggestion about commas, I wrote this piece in a style hugely unlike my usual one. I went for a very ...

Haha, thanks...I guess xD As for why they outlined their plan, well, you'll see later. ^^

No problem, my pleasure actually. ^^ I was extremely bored and reading/reviewing this got time to move faster for a while. :D

Thanks for the advice. :) When I started writing this, I had no idea what the structure of a poem was supposed to be, so no wonder some lines are ...

Impressive, I must say. ^^ I'm looking forward to seeing your works here. I thought that forges would cost a lot more, like in the thousands, though I'm not saying ...

Thanks for all the compliments Bladesmith! :) Black humor is something new I'm trying, so I'm glad that people find it funny. That might just mean that I have a ...

My first idea was that it would only have around 5 parts, but now I've found a liking to the story, and, I admit, am completely hooked with these characters. ...

Hey Bladesmith, thanks for the advice on the rapier! ^^ I myself happen to love weapons of all sorts (though I don't really understand the "mechanics" involved in the making ...