WaitingForLife

Heya, missed this until now, sorry for being blind! :D And thanks. As to the randomness and overall inconsistencies in style, well, I guess I'll have to chalk that up ...

Hmm, I see your point. I'll poke around the piece and see if I can come up with a sentence or two to deviate more clearly from mere suicide. Thanks ...

Hmm, I see your point. I'll poke around the piece and see if I can come up with a sentence or two to deviate more clearly from mere suicide. Thanks ...

Thanks for your thoughts. ^^ The point was to question the way media commercialises death, and ridicule the thought through this eccentric voice who wishes to commit suicide in order ...

Thanks for the review. :) I'll fix those up too. I think what I saw as lackluster was the lack of sensory details, and it seems significantly more fleshed out ...

Wow, thanks for such an in-depth review. I write late at night (this one at 6 a.m. >> ) and usually end up having weird things in there that make ...

Thanks! Yeah, the idea was to have him be an "everyman", hence the stupid name as well. Glad you liked it. :)

Wow, the quotations freaked out. :D Sorry about that, hope it isn't too disturbing.

Heya, thanks a bunch! ^^ Great points, I'll fix 'em up. Twit's current state of character is supposed to be dull and almost two-dimensional, the beginning being there to set ...

Thanks for the extensive thoughts! ^^ It's definitely going to be fantasy, as they'll exit the "real world" soon enough. Oh, and the beginning was supposed to be highly rushed. ...

And I second my reply. Funny world, isn't it?

One and all, we are entitled to our opinions. It would seem our humour is worlds apart and, alas, intergalactic bridges seem to be out of commision for now. Shame, ...

Most welcome. :)

Got it.

Oh, come on. Apparently it was too large or something to review like this. -.- Friggin frig, almost two hours down the drain. What's the site you use to post ...