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Thank you. ^^

Your third point of what you didn't like is a very interesting one, something I've never even thought about. The ending is supposed to bring it full circle, with the ...

Thanks! :)

Thanks :) As to how I came up with this, I don't really know. When I wrote this, I had no real clue where it would go; I just started ...

Thanks. :) I doubt that was the assignment, but having this story compared even remotely to 'American Gods' is awesome. It being one of my favorite books, though, I wouldn't ...

Haha, no problem, I found it well enough! Thanks for the review. :)

Sorry about the blue color spazzing out. The codes should be fine, but something just went wrong somewhere. One quote is messed up as well, and that's all on me, ...

Thanks for the thoughts! Everything after the metal bed part is the MC morphing into the hobo. The reflection bit, in which the MC watches his body disappear as the ...

Thanks! :) Haha, yeah, the middle is somewhat of a drug-trip.

Heya, decided to drop a comment, even if this won't be a full-blown review. I've read some works of your's before and I have seen your confidence in them. In ...

Thanks for the review! Oh, I've never even heard Lincholn's speech, so no great intertextuality there. The idea of the short stanzas was to make it choppier, like fragments of ...

Thanks for the inputs! I can totally see how I might be wordy at times, especially in poetry, where I sometimes try to cram as much as I can into ...

Oh, Mr. Floss is a character I've used earlier. He's sort of like a supernatural assassin, so his job was to assassinate the team for some reason unknown to Spite. ...

Thanks for the inputs! Haha, and thanks for showing me all the rather stupid mistakes I managed to make. Definitely gonna fix those up. As for why he didn't shoot, ...

A brilliantly refreshing idea, really enjoyed this one. I'm not gonna review it, cause that's all I had to say. Keep writing. ^^ |Life|