WaitingForLife

Thanks for the helpful advice. :) Your concerns about the Garden are just, and I have planned to use it later on, for exactly the reason you said (I don't ...

Thanks for another comment Mazey! :) Your question was a good one. My idea basically was that Ryne had infiltrated Maximillion's ranks; I'll have him explain it in the coming ...

Hey, thanks for the comment! :) This might yet become a prolouge, as I've been trying to rack my brains since writing this to think of a way to continue ...

Thanks for the comments again everyone! ^^ Oh, I thought I'd rated it 18+, seems I forgot. Sorry about that; I'll change it immediatley. SCONCES, SCONCES, SCONCES.... I guess third ...

Hey, thanks (again) for the review! Your points have been remedied (is that even a word? :D). And yes, I thought about the thing with the crossbow too actually. It ...

Hey Mazey, thanks for the review! :) Haha yeah, changed it to scones, thanks for pointing that out. :D You got the characters' personalities pretty much spot on, and by ...

Thanks again for the review! :) First of all, I didn't find your review short at all, just sayin'. ;) You had valid points, and I'll try to cut down ...

Heya, thanks for the comment! :) Yeah, I've actually got a decent idea of how to continue this already. It's just a matter of if I feel like continuing it ...

Hey, thank you so much! :) I was sort of nervous to post this, as I have no clue of the right "structure" of a poem, I just go by ...

Thankyou for the comments! :) Changed it to "by candlelight". In the third stanza, he is, ah, taking her virginity, to sound as non-graphic as possible. :P And if my ...

Glad you liked it! ^^ I actually started writing this to practice my fight scenes, so it's great that you found it thrilling, seems I succeeded to some extent at ...

Thank you for the comments, glad all you liked it ^^ I like to dabble in different forms of writing, so I might post more poems too. Yours truly, |Life|

Thanks for the feedback! That article was very helpful, thanks alot for that ultraviolet! :) You had good points and I'll try to make this chapter clearer. Just to make ...

Allright, Ive tried to edit it up to date now. Thanks for the replies and so on and so forth :D

Thank you for taking your time and reviewing this, I really appreciate it ^^ Ill be editing the glitches you mentioned tomorrow or the day after, just as soon as ...