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Re: The Gift- Short Story
I must say.... THIS AMAZING!!! it is full of suspense and drama!! I loved how you used the characters to interact with each other and at the end when Lucia ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter One, Part 1 (Revised)
Hello!! This story must be a cliffhanger or suspense filler, right? Anyway, the way you use imagery is the best and how people think that he is a monster with ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Trail Mix Chapter 1: Almonds
This seems like real life problems that any babysitter would have and that's coming from someone who actually baby-sits. I like how you used the characters actions towards each other ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Scion of the Moon, Chapter 1, Farewell to Foss
Hia!! I must say this story you have wrote is.. there are no words to say what I just read ( if I had any, they would be good). Its ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Forget Their Scripts.
This poems shows the same way I feel of society.. its like we have scripts and we have to follow the lines of the world without even stopping like a ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: freedom in the darkness
This is not a bad poem!!! I think you did an amazing job on the imagery and it is leaking with metaphors or similes plus since I'm in love with ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: there is a hurricane
This is an amazing poem!!! This is the best one I have every read!!! I like how you use imagery and the concept of the rain bleeding from the sky ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Guilt Trap
This a page turner like you said!!! Its like a Hunger Games or Sherlock Holmes...I want more The pointers in this story are that its has very good description of ...
Sep 7, 2014