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Re: vegetarianism
Hello sueprin! I'm going to review "vegetarianism" for you today, and I'd like to start of by saying I liked it. It's got some good elements of comedy, and it ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Dreamland.
Welcome to YWS first and foremost, everyone here is very welcoming so I'm sure you'll like it. There's always people willing to help in the forums or the chatroom, so ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Gifts From God
Ty, you've gone and done it again. I like that your experimenting with different forms (or at least, I haven't read anything you've written that was an epistolary!), and I ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: More Summer Mixes (Presents for YWS)
As soon as I saw "OK" - Shitdisco, it was an instant download. I think you may be the first person I've encountered who's ever known of them. I will ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: A Collection of Thoughts
Hey Rubz, Firstly, welcome to YWS etc. etc. I'm sure you'll like it here, seeing as you've got some good thoughts brewing in that brain it seems, from reading this. ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: One Time Only
RIGHT-O I did like this song rather a lot. As per usual for a Ty written piece, there was a lot of emotion poured in. Some excellent rhyme, and again ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Mother's Day
Hey megsug, I enjoyed reading this piece, and I hope your mother likes it too! First, I'll just point out a couple of little things, to get them out of ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Sinews
I saw this whole thing in as a grainy black and white film noir in my mind, very emotive stuff. It switched to like an old Super 8mm image saturated ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Pianissimo: The Gentle Fall of Rain
Really enjoyed reading this, and about your explanation for the parts it makes total sense (and I like your use of terms of musical dynamics, pretty clever)! Reading this I ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: You just gotta hang in there.
I have to say that a wasn't expecting that at all, but it was great! By the time I got to the end it just had me hoping that one ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Chapter 1
Very, very nice. Having not read the prologue, I'm intrigued to read on and find out more! I have to say I love your descriptive prose, it's excellent at setting ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: No Manual
Hey, I liked read this. It's an internal question we all go through at some point, and I enjoyed how you put it with the rhetorical questions which you then ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Dangerous Temptations
Marissa Calhoun burst out of the nightmare by the sound to the annoying sound of a phone ringing. I can see this is where you went back to edit, I ...
Apr 13, 2011
