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I'm not going to go into grammer and punctuation, since mne is utterly terrible. The concept is very good, very original as well. For me the only thing I don't ...

I love it, Allen really reminds me off a kid who went to my primary school, he always had and amazing amount of witty insults. I'm curious about what happens, ...

Ok I am so gona get flamed for afew books in here. 1. Any Matthew Reilly book, With Scarecrow, 7 ancient wonders or 6 sacred stones at the top. 2. ...

Pure dude I fell sorry for him, yet at the same time I was laughing at him. The other two got most of the grammer punctuation things so not much ...

Wow that must've taken you ages to write. Good work. Personally I dont like you saying "three steps ahead" over and over again but thats just me, alot of people ...

That was very good, a little cliche but as poems go on it's hard to find something original to right about, and you dont really notice the extremely little cliche ...

It's a good poem but it lacks, the rythem and imagery that make most good poems. Everyones right it sounds like this came out of the "about me" bit of ...

Nice poem but still needs a bit of work, your definitions in my opinion are to standerd. In other words basically what medusa said. I particularly liked this bit Where ...

Nice poem. Like someone said the third line was a little forced. Youve tryed to rhyme quite hard and you have lost some meaning. However if you think about the ...

Nice structure, nice words and nice over all poem. What else can you say but QUALITY!!!!!!!! A minor thing at the start you say "I can never remember, flying overhead ...