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Re: The Chains of Death
A silent yowl came from Joe, old, strong Joe, who had lived well after his tenth birthday, who had escaped death countless times. This sentence seems a little long and ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Anna
That was a very, very good story. However I would say that after three minutes I highly doubt a man would have become ashes. My guess would be a skeleton ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: The Hitch Hiker (working title) #1
Gran had asked me to take out the donut dough out of the refrigerator. I would change this to either, Gran had asked me to take out the donut dough ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Endless Possibilities -- Prologue
What he saw made his heart swell with pity, even if he didn’t understand what he was seeing. [. . .] Her leg was twisted, and it made Dan feel ...
Jan 6, 2008