W-Lupus

Please, please review this. It's a schoolwork and I need help with it. It's only aloud up to 3 pages so that's why it's not so detailed, but please help! ...

Nice work. As far as i know , I haven't seen werewolves used in this way. Plot wise , its sound , though i do think that the prologue could ...

the plot is developing well but things like grammar can let you down a bit. The story flows nicely as it is , but i think it would be even ...