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Thank you!!! This review really means a lot. I keep going back in and fixing things but I definitely missed those points, so thank you very much. I'm glad that ...

That'd be awesome! I'll keep a lookout for more!

haha thank you that was my intention. I was trying to confuse out of irony. I'm glad you laughed thank you for your interpretation :)

I think the concept that I percevieved in your poem is pretty great and it didn't look like you were trying to show off, don't worry. I definitely see the ...

Then again I am very new to poetry so my apologies.

thank you and yeah I know the first poem didn't make a lot of sense but at the time I wrote it the reason I used those words was that ...

yeah, my computer likes to autocorrect me so the name "Conan" ended up as Canon thanks for pointing it out I'm going to go fix it shortly :) Yes, that ...

I 100 percent agree

Thank you for the pointers :) yeah I recently got Grammarly and that seems to be helping a lot but I didn't use it on this story. :) I sent ...

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Thank you so much! I agree, I did drag on the water scene a tad longer than I intended, but I wrote this about a year ago with a recent ...

Thank you! I tried really hard to find the right French-English translation. French is definitely not my forte. If you have any ideas on how I can improve my mistakes ...

Thank you very much for your review..very insightful thank you