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Re: A (kind of long) short story - over 13
OMG... this is... it's wow. It's just great. It's so descriptive and I didn't expect it and just... yeah. what I mean is it rocks! :D
Apr 17, 2006 -
Re: Dreams are Not Realistic
Everyone has pretty much said whatever there's left to critique. But I think you should continue this. It's up to you whether it's a short story or a chapter story.
Apr 17, 2006 -
Re: New Story!(chapter one)
I hate when people used 'I'. Should I just metion her name in the first paragraph? Anyway, come back to RK! No one's there :cry: ~Ashley~ :twisted:
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: New Story!(chapter one)
KayKay: Yeah I'm Ashley. I'm guessing you're Kayla. Anyway, Deidre is the main character so she's telling the story. Maybe I'll make the first paragraph like this instead. What do ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Ignore this one: read Gone Away Home(i changed it)
Okay good but does that mean I should? :twisted:
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: Lost
You have school? :shock: But but it's President Day. I'm off. 8)
Feb 21, 2005