VoicesTellMeWat2Rite

This story of mine is whatever i'm gonna fix it up later anyways

Phoenix lands to review And flee did he, with his child in tow . that would indicate that she is following him. A new born can't follow people. Also you ...

please people review!!!!!

oh i know...wait til u hear the song then it will sound better

beautiful just beautiful :)

yea ok...well u c the main character tylor is a girl just to clarify

if u could pls read and review my story

Very Very good and just as goldenquill stated just fix those things up...but either then tht keep it coming 8)