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Virgil

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 11

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review! So, I haven't read much of this novel. I believe that the most I've read is a chapter, and if any, ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hidden Entity - 4 - The Goddess and Her Prophetess

    So, I thought I'd hop in this morning for another review, and this time, it's on your chapter! I greatly appreciate the Author's Note that's at the end of the ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Strangers- chapter one

    This is Nikayla here dropping in here for a review. I see that you have an interest in inner-monologue in this first chapter, and I have to say, I'm not ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 11

    This is Nikayla here dropping in once again for another review! Keeping the Green Room clean, naturally I'm here for a review. I'm actually quite the fan of the descriptions ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Deleted 38

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review near the very end of Review Day! So I like the imagery in this poem, let's get that across, though the ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: earth

    I hope you don't mind me coming back for yet another review! This is Nikayla here hopping in for a review at the end of this Review Day. Nonetheless, let's ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: good bye version 2

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a quick review nearing the edge and end of Review Day! So this poem is pretty simple, and sometimes I have problems with ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Secret Dance

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review at the end of Review Day! So the flow here in this piece is stronger than usual, which I enjoy. I ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: whitman-napo for 4/21/17

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I'm always a fan of poems that include classic poets with a good execution, and this poem ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Addiction

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! You asked for this. I'm not addicted to this poem, that's for sure, younger Adri. Seems like this ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 49

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! I've expressed that I love your writing before, and this is no exception to that expression. I have ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: No Destination (Chapter 9: Homely and Lonely)

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Not the largest fan of this chapter, particularly for the lack of plot. If there were more action or substance that ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Son of the Black - Chapter Seven of Shattered Crowns

    Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Have to agree with Lumi on everything he says about this. Didn't find this very enjoyable and I'll just go ahead and outright ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch10 Pt1

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I don't believe I've ever read or reviewed a piece of yours, but I have to say that from what I've ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 21 (Betelgeuse)

    Woah. I love this chapter. There's a lack of an actual Avery Trent in this chapter, but I don't mind, because dang. I enjoyed this chapter for the new perspective ...

    Apr 30, 2017


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman