Victinino494

I always dreamed of becoming a phoenix-like creature, or having a phoenix for a companion. I just love the idea of literally undying loyalty. Something everyone lacks these days :( ...

I'm not sure how to write a review for something so short, but I like it. First thing that strikes me about this poem is that I admire the 3-year-old ...

Okay, the poem has a great rhythm the whole way, except that last line; however that last line made me laugh, so it's intended effect is great and obviously worked. ...

Wow, cool. Yep, I like the idea, I like where you're going with this and I think that both you and this work have potential to go far. First off, ...

Wow, this is a great poem. I can really see where you want me to go when reading this, I can hear and sense the environment like I am there. ...