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Haha thanks. I know the rhythm was just not working out for me tonight. I'm very annoyed at the amount of homework I have for one class right now. "Morbid" ...

That's is actually a very good writing activity! It really helps get your creativity moving, I approve of your teacher haha. aMego

I liked the authors style as well.... in the beginning. But then it really just died, like she got bored and needed more action.

Please...take her suggestion and download it. We would all really appreciate this.

Not poetry. *moved*

This is not poetry dear. Please read the rules before posting any further. -moved-

I have to agree that this is a very impressive prologue. However, now you've built the story up to be amazing--so it better be or the reader will be very ...

Boys: This particular thread is not the place to have this 'discussion'. Brad has actually started a thread for this exact reason, please take your argument there or continue over ...

I'm sorry about your friend. We suffered a loss here last week as well. I'm not going to crit this. But instead offer my condolences. Meg

Thanks for the crit! I will take it all into consideration and revise it before too long here. Meg

I have to agree with Rei. The flow is fine; for the most part it's understandable. But there just isn't anything spectacular here that makes me want to read it ...

Thank you! This was just one of the unusual school papers that was enjoyable to write! Meg

Haha sure. I actually did this for a class my senior year and my teacher, who had read the poem, wrote up a list of guidelines for writing our pieces. ...

I liked this as well! You've impressed me....this may be the best thing you have posted yet! I also second, or third, or fourth....the flow issue. But I guess I ...

thanks. I actually took the gist of this poem and rewrote it completely and reposted it today--take a look please? Thanks guys!