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Hey Blank! Well, it looks like Suzanne has pretty much tackled this already. I really don't have much to add, unfortunately. But, I'll try anyway! :] I have to agree ...

I think everything that is wrong with this poem can be fixed if you honour one code of poetry: Do not start every line (or even several lines in a ...

Actually I quite like this. It's short (and the fact that I like that is incredibly odd) yet to the point. I think, though that the last line should be ...

Hi Lil-- One question: why would she cry for the whole day BEFORE she ripped the puppy in half? It's cute, but it's not long enough or 'meaty' enough to ...

Hi blacktiger-- Can I suggest a different form for this? When reading a poem it gets horribly boring to read the same line over and and over and over and ...

Hi Ferris-- Where is the punctuation?! Hehe, you really need some...and here's why: An entrance to the beach, through the back door of a truck Designed for land and water ...

Hello Cutestuff-- Welcome to the YWS. Please take a moment to look over the Rules & Guides . We do ask that you make at least 2 reviews of others ...

Hey Rieda! This is an okay little ditty. The problem with poems this short, though, is everything has to be absolutely perfect for it to work because there is no ...

Hi Fire-- Well, this is...okay. There is something about it that is bothering me but I can't put my finger on it. I think the "I hate" lines weren't tied ...

This is short, but it's okay too. I'll see what I can suggest here... I think what is going on is instead of going to the next line you are ...

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Hi Jack! Welcome to the YWS! Glad to have you around. Now onto the poem... I actually really like this! It shows some definite potential and often times that's hard ...

Well, one problem here that will overrule anything else wrong with it is that there is no punctuation! When you have a poem with no punctuation the entire thing is ...

*Throws up hands* I agree with all said above! The biggest problem with this poem is this poem! How odd, eh? We all appreciate the description, and there is a ...

my eyes go to you and how you look at me.