Veritas

So short and yet so very effective and powerful. I call that a successful poem. I loved "They promised you the world/They gave you a corner". Very, very, powerful. Loved ...

Wow....that should be in a book somewhere!! I can't find anything to nitpick! Very intense despite it's length. It really does make you think about how worthless a kiss has ...

The content of this poem is very beautiful a it was a pleasant read. I think you could change the format up a bit though. Some verses are super long, ...