Veracelle

WOW, i really like it. It sounds very chic (if a poem can sound like that). It really sounds like a little romantic-struck girl singing this song while walking down ...

It is... okay. the rhymes FIT and everything, but there's not emotion, no feeling, no flow or scene to set. You can be a great poet, everyone can! just make ...

WOW! I love that poem! (even if I don't have one and its for Kellie... :) ) I love the imagination and graceful flow of the sentences. The song of ...

WOW. it really makes you think about it and read between the lines. Very interesting, kind of weird. But very good. I love that Shiny teeth, a winning token. Motionlessly ...

I like it. It is very descriptive. I like the "Drip, drop on my skin". It almost sounds young, like an innocent child making up a song about the beautiful ...

The Shriners with their tiny bikes Are children with their candy stripes Catching The sun light leapt from to and fro. Who exactly are the Shriners? Do you mean Shiners? ...

I love you Rhiine, and your writing!!! Very good, and I adore that prologue. "Love is like the wind..." I totally understand it (well, duh, I was there when you ...